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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 14, 2007 11:51:08 GMT -5
I like to build suspence ;D
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Apr 14, 2007 12:02:48 GMT -5
cool!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 14, 2007 12:22:07 GMT -5
Mike is dragging Yanu down the hall. Mike is still holding Yanu's hand. "Hee! There is a surprise for you!" "W-what?" Mike doesn't look back.
Notcha is walking down the hall. Mike and Yanu approach him. "Hey Notcha." ".....Hey." He looks at Yanu. "This is Yanu." "Hi. I'm Notcha." "H-Hi." Yanu says blushing a little.
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Apr 15, 2007 13:58:44 GMT -5
awesome!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 25, 2007 15:51:50 GMT -5
Yanu looks down. Notcha continues starring at him. Mike grabs Yanu's hand then drags himn down the hall. They are heading down to where the washrooms are.
A woman steps from the door way. She's wearing jeans and a t-shirt. Her hair is cut short. She stares at the broken window. She looks at the bloody pillow and sheets. She grow's grim.
Mike shoves Yanu into a stall and closes the door. "Take a shower, Yanu!" Yanu stares at the door. Then he unbottons pants.
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Apr 28, 2007 8:10:31 GMT -5
ok
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 28, 2007 21:40:03 GMT -5
Mike paces outside the stall. "Hurry up." "I'm hurring. Sorry." Mike cocks his head a little. "Okay." he mumbles. The water squeaks off. Mike takes the clothes he was holding and puts it above the door.
The woman runs over to the little girl on the bed. She rips some sheets and wraps her bleeding wrists. The woman is breathing hard. She then runs out of the room and heads for the phone. She dials 911.
Yanu and Mike are heading to the play room. In there is a few chairs, a couple chouches, a TV, window and a couple tables. Sitting on one of the chairs is Yanu's aunt. She smiles.
Mike is walking down the halls. (I wonder what's up with Mida.)
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Apr 29, 2007 14:14:54 GMT -5
awesome!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 30, 2007 16:27:15 GMT -5
The woman holds the little girl. The girl's eyes are vacant. Both of them are crying. The blood is starting to seap from the bandage of sheets. The little girl closes her eyes.
Yanu and his aunt is walking on the sidewalk. Yanu is holding her hand.
A nurse is talking to the woman. "Ms. Filonu, she'll be fine....... do you know what happened?" She shakes her head. Ms. Filonu looks horrible. Her hair is messed up. Her make-up smeared and she is still trying to stop crying. "Okay. You can go in her room now." The nurse turns and walks off. Clip board against her chest. Filonu reaches for the door handle.
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Apr 30, 2007 16:39:03 GMT -5
ur freakin awesome!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 30, 2007 18:33:47 GMT -5
Notcha lays down. (His beautiful blush........) Notcha smiles.
Ms. Filonu steps into the room. The little girl is laying on the bed. Tubes are connected to her. Giving her blood and medicine. Filonu starts crying.
Notcha springs off the bed. (I need to find him and talk to him!) Notcha rushes out the door.
"I don't care! Let me see her!" There is yelling outside the door. Filonu has already left. She went to get some food. "Okay. But don't yell antmore. This is a hospital." "Thank-you." The clicks open. "You have ten minutes." says the nurse. She's holding the door open.
Notcha spots Mike. Notcha sprints to him. "Hey!" Notcha is breathing hard. "Oh. Hi. What do you want?" Notcha smiles.
"......M-....Mida." The girl on the hospital bed flinches a little. "It's me. They don't know I'm here. So don't worry." She move a little. ".....Dai?.." She moves her head. Dai walks to her bed. "I'm.......I'm here. Don't worry." There is a bandage on Dai's face.
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 30, 2007 18:42:55 GMT -5
Mike stares at Notcha. "................................."
"You.............You shouldn't....be here.." Dai stares at her. "Shhh. No one knows I'm here. So It's alright." Mida open's her eyes a little. Tears are rolling down her eyes. "E-everything hurts." Dai has tears in eyes too. "I know. Try to sleep. Sleeping has always helped you when you went through attacks." "But....But you always slept with me." Dai looks surprised. ".........Ca-can you move a-alittle." Mida moves a smidge. she winces at the pain. Dai climbs into the small bed. Minding the tubes. "Are-are you okay?" "Y-Yes...."
Filonu is walking down the hall.
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 30, 2007 18:59:32 GMT -5
"I-I'm....so-sor-ry." stutters Mida."Fo-r hurting you..." Dai is sitting up straight, sort of. Mida's head is on his chest. She closes her eyes. Dai doesn't say anything. He then closes his eyes and doses off. The door clicks open.
Notcha nods. "Okay....." Mike is still staring at him. "He left with his mom." "Oh.." Notcha looks a bit sad now. "He'll be back in a couple hours don't worry." Notcha nods.
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Post by zoedosadaku on May 2, 2007 15:35:27 GMT -5
Mida is curled up in her bed. She's griping her piliow. (I hate You! I...hate....you all!) She is breathing hard. (Stop it!) She bites her pillow.
Heels click on the floor. The nurse stares at the Mida and Dai. She places her clipboard on the desk in the corner. She sighs. She walks over to the bed. "Get up." She shakes Dai a little. He opens his eyes slowly. "Get off her bed." He obeys. He starts to walk out the door, but then looks back at Mida.
As Mike is walking down to the hall, something catches his eyes. He stops and studies the calendor. (Almost time.) He turns away from it and keeps walking down the hall.
Little Dai is walking on the sidewalk to his home. Filonu steps into Mida's room.
Mida closes her eyes. A tear run's across her face.
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Post by zoedosadaku on May 3, 2007 16:04:22 GMT -5
Notcha goes into the kitche. "Hey Dean!" "Oh! Hi!" He looks a little embaressed. Notcha looks down and freaks out. She runs out of the kitchen.
Ms Dofi is in her office. Someones knocks at the door. "Come in." The opens. From there steps Tina. "Oh. Hi Tina." ".....Are you free to .....talk?" "Of course. What do you need?" Tina comes in and closes the door. "It's about................Syu."
Mike places a blanket cover Mida and walks out the room.
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