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Post by zoedosadaku on Mar 25, 2007 11:17:22 GMT -5
Mida stares at him. Yanu's face gets red. 'Calm down, Yanu. It's alright.' "Ah! Hey Mida! I was about to come to your room!" says Mike from behind Yanu. Mida looks at Yanu then Mike. "Come on, Mike. I'm hungry." She turns around and Mike follows her. Mike is carrying a plate of food. As he brushes past Yanu, he pats him on the shoulder. Yanu watches them. Then he goes to his room. 'Are you okay?' Yanu is walking extremly fast. He's still red. His breath is heavy. "*huff* Y-Yes. I-I thin- Think......" He reaches the door to his room and goes in.
--------to be continued
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Mar 25, 2007 11:26:17 GMT -5
i love it all and i cant critise!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Mar 30, 2007 16:02:02 GMT -5
Iny places his hand on Yanu's shoulder. 'Come on. Go take a shower.' Iny smiles. Yanu's back is against the door. He raises his head and looks at Iny. "...................Okay." He stands there a minute.
------------OMG!! That was so frickin short! SORRY YOU GUYS!! SORRY! *runs to a corner*
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Mar 30, 2007 16:36:00 GMT -5
awesome!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 2, 2007 11:16:35 GMT -5
I have a writers block again!! NOOO!!!!
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Apr 2, 2007 18:41:05 GMT -5
lol i know it sux!!!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 9, 2007 12:43:13 GMT -5
Yanu is taking a shower. (Does she hate me?) Yanu looks sad. (I hope she doesn't.) The washroom door opens. They slam together. Yanu glances at his shower door. (It's locked.) He lets out a breath.
Mike is in his room. It's alittle dirty. But not as dirty as Mida's room. He is looking out the window. It's raining slightly.
>SQUEAKKK< Yanu turns off the shower. He wraps a towel around his waist and unlocks his shower door. He opens the door. Standing out there is Mida.
----------to be continued **Sorry for it being so short! At least I finally wrote something on it.
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 10, 2007 16:59:17 GMT -5
"..........Listen." mutters Mida. Yanu just stares at her.
Yanu is walking to his room. He's wearing clothes. He's blushing a little. Iny rushes to him. 'What happened? Are you okay?' "Yeah. I'm okay. Iny." Iny studies his face. He then hugs Yanu. Yanu hugs back.
Mida comes out of the washroom. She streches a minute then heads to her room.
---------to be continued **Sorry for the shortness!!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 12, 2007 17:34:12 GMT -5
Yanu goes to his closet door and reaches for the knob. He turns it and opens the door. He glances down. Sitting there is Karma. Yanu's mouth hangs open.
Mida heads to her room. She hears yelling. She stops and listens. "I'm going to kill you!! Out of my room now!" Mida stands there then runs to the voices.
Karma looks up at him. She has the innocence face on. Yanu slams the door. (Yahhhhhh!!!! what do I do. What do I do?) Yanu is starting to panic. Yanu runs out of his room. (Maybe if I just leave her, she'll go away!) >Huff - huff<
Mida stops at the door with so much noise. She grabs the knob and pushes the door. She seems really mad. Standing there is two boys. Both of them are breathing hard from when they were yelling.
---------to be continued
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 12, 2007 17:59:34 GMT -5
They don't look at her. They continue panting. Mida opens her mouth to speak but his interupted when the boy in the red long sleeve shirt turn to Mida and storms off hitting Mida on the shoulder. He stomps down the hall. The other guy stares at the floor. He seems like he's about to cry. Mida stares at him then turns around.
Notcha sits on the bed. He's about to cry. (I loved him. Why?)
Yanu leans against the wall. (Maybe she's gone now.) He starts walking down the hall now. Mida stands there. 'Mommy doens't love me.' standing in front of Mida is a little girl. She's crying. Mida runs. She runs through the little girl. The girl disappears. Mida continues running. (damn it! An attack!) Mida's vision starts to fade.
Yanu opens the door to his room. He goes to the closet. He reaches for the knob and turns it. The closet door opens and no one is in there. Yanu let's out a sig of relief. He then goes to his bed and crawls in. Under his bed is Karma.
-----to be continued
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 13, 2007 15:59:14 GMT -5
The girl from earlier is laying on her bed. Her head buried in her pillow. She's crying. Her hands are bleeding. "It hurts. It hurts so much." she sobs into her pillow. Her window is broken. a picture is hanging crooked. The door clicks open...............................
It's morning. Yanu gets out of bed and strechtes. He goes to his closet and opens it. He pulls out some clothes and puts on his pants. >Knock< Knock< Yanu bottons his pants and goes to the door.
----------to be continued
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 14, 2007 8:59:18 GMT -5
Yanu opens it. Standing out there is Mike. "HEEEYYYY!!!" Mike waves is arms. "Come on!" Mike grabs is hands and drags him down the hall. "Ah. Um..."
Notcha gets out of bed. (It's not the end of the world. When you go out, look as if the break up didn't hurt you.) Notcha goes to his closet and digs through a box. he grabs some clothes and goes out of his room.
-----------to be contu=inued
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Apr 14, 2007 11:35:57 GMT -5
AWESOME!
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Post by zoedosadaku on Apr 14, 2007 11:39:31 GMT -5
OOOOOO!! I wn=onder what happens next!
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Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Apr 14, 2007 11:47:43 GMT -5
idk your the author!
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