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Jan 20, 2007 12:04:10 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 20, 2007 12:04:10 GMT -5
yea!!!!!!!! now u need to put some of ur art on here....
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Jan 20, 2007 12:07:29 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 20, 2007 12:07:29 GMT -5
I can't sign on to photobucket. Sorry.
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Jan 20, 2007 12:11:55 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 20, 2007 12:11:55 GMT -5
oh ok.....ur so cool emily!!!!!!
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Jan 20, 2007 12:13:45 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 20, 2007 12:13:45 GMT -5
Why? Oh my cheese! Control has reached 5 pages and has been viewed more than 200 times! I'm so happy!! Of course it's probably by the same people but still Yay!
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Jan 20, 2007 12:22:35 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 20, 2007 12:22:35 GMT -5
yea!!!!
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Jan 20, 2007 12:38:23 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 20, 2007 12:38:23 GMT -5
"Yanu, don't worry it's only for a little while.'' Yanu and his aunt is walking into the building. " I'll visit every week and send little care packages." Yanu is holding his aunt'a hand and Iny's hand. "Thank - you for letting Iny come." Yanu's aunt smiles. " Your welcome." Yanu and his aunt are greeted by Ms. Dofi. "Hi Yanu." "H-Hi." He says it in a whisper. She just smiles. "Okay. Follow me and I'll show you where you will be sleeping." They follow her. On their way down the hall, the cluster of people brush past Dai and Dean. Yanu looks back and sqeezes Iny's hand tighter.
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Jan 20, 2007 12:39:55 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 20, 2007 12:39:55 GMT -5
cool!!!
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Jan 20, 2007 13:11:23 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 20, 2007 13:11:23 GMT -5
Yanu is unpacking. His aunt is helping him. They are really uncomfortable. "Um, Iny? Iny?" Yanu gets up and starts looking all over the room. "Ugh! I hate it when he plays hide-and-seek without telling me!" Yanu's aunt stares at the clothes shes unpacking. "Honey, why don't we finish packing first? He'll come out when he's ready." "Okay." Someones in the doorway. It's Dean. "Hello." "H-Hi." (Thats the guy I saw in the hallway! Were's the other person though?) "I see you're almost done with your packing." Yanu's aunt gets up. "Hi. I'm Cera." She sticks her hand out. "I'm Dean. I work here. Dinner is about ready Yanu." Yanu stares at him. "How do you know my name?" "It's my job." He leaves.
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Jan 20, 2007 13:14:16 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 20, 2007 13:14:16 GMT -5
*smiles at you*
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Jan 20, 2007 13:34:26 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 20, 2007 13:34:26 GMT -5
Dai is sitting down. Mida's head is on his lap. She's uncouncous. Dean steps into the room. Looking down at Mida."You were right. why was her attack worse. Look at her! Why didn't you--" "Mmm." Dai calms down a little. "You really care for her, don't you?" Dai gives Dean an angry look. Dean just looks back. "Come on. Time to eat." Dai stays in place. "Now or you can't see her until tomorrow." Dai slowly puts Mida's head on the floo. Careful not to hurt her. He gets up and leaves with Dean. "Today's dinner is salmon with fries." (Sali, Fyn and Enri must be cooking.) Gloomly Dai walks to the dinning room.
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Jan 21, 2007 12:15:19 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 21, 2007 12:15:19 GMT -5
awesome!!
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Jan 21, 2007 17:25:40 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 21, 2007 17:25:40 GMT -5
"Sweetie I have to be going." Yanu looks up. He looks as if he's about to cry. "I'll be back in a week." She goes over and hugs him. "You can always call me." She gets up. I love you Yanu. Remember that." "I love you too!" She walks outs the room. He follows her but heads off to a different direction. He's heading to the dining room. He doesn't even look back. On his way to the dinning room he is greeted by a girl. She goes up to him and looks at him. She circles around him. He's startled. He just stands there. Finally she stops and he speaks, softly, "Um....Excuse me, what's you name?" She doesn't say anything. She walks past him. He seems very confused. He turns around and watches her walk away. (Wonder who she is.) He shrugs it off. "Oh! Iny. There you are! Where have you been?" Silence. "Exploring. I was wondering where you went to." He graps Iny's hand and walks continues his journey to the dining room.
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Jan 21, 2007 17:27:34 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 21, 2007 17:27:34 GMT -5
Sorry. I have to watch what I'm doing! I goofed on some parts.
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Jan 22, 2007 6:39:32 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 22, 2007 6:39:32 GMT -5
Yanu is about to enter the dinning room, but he gets to scared and makes a room for his room. "I know, Iny, I know! It's not good to chicken out but.......... I don't care!" He bursts into his room, slams the door. He puts his back against the door. "We- huff- made it Iny!" He graps his pijammas and underwear from the dresser. " Iny stay here. I'm going to take a shower and get ready for bed. I'll be back soon." He carefully opens the door. he sticks his head out and looks around. (Whew! No one around.) He carefully steps out and slinks to the bathrooms.
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Jan 22, 2007 15:54:25 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 22, 2007 15:54:25 GMT -5
there both awesome!!!
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