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Jan 15, 2007 13:36:07 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 13:36:07 GMT -5
"S-Stop it!" There are dancing shadows all around her. She can't move, to scared. "All your fault. All your fault"the shadows are chanting that saying over and over. "You know it is. the secret of it is in your soul! It's your FAULT!" "No! It's not my fault..." Slowly she bursts into tears. They rejoice and laugh. "It is your fault. Hahahaha. Oh what's wrong? Do hate hearing the truth?"
---To be continued
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Jan 15, 2007 13:36:35 GMT -5
Post by mangafreakadam14 on Jan 15, 2007 13:36:35 GMT -5
did u write that?
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Jan 15, 2007 13:39:20 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 13:39:20 GMT -5
yes........... if you want I'll write somemore later............. what do you think?
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Jan 15, 2007 13:43:13 GMT -5
Post by mangafreakadam14 on Jan 15, 2007 13:43:13 GMT -5
yea write some more!!!!!!!!! that is so cool!!!!!!!!! i lov it!!!
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Jan 15, 2007 13:49:32 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 13:49:32 GMT -5
"Go away.......Leave me alone!"Fear is all she is feeling right now. Fear of the truth, fear of the shadows and the fear that it's all a dream."Go away. Please." "Hahahaha! And what will you do when where gone?" there's silence..... It's to dark to see but she knows they're there. Watching her. Snickering at her bravery.
---- To be continued
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Jan 15, 2007 13:53:19 GMT -5
Post by mangafreakadam14 on Jan 15, 2007 13:53:19 GMT -5
thats really good you should be a poet!!!!!!!!!!
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Jan 15, 2007 13:56:37 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 13:56:37 GMT -5
I'll write some more later. I'll show you my art work tomorrow if you want to see it.....
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Jan 15, 2007 13:59:57 GMT -5
Post by mangafreakadam14 on Jan 15, 2007 13:59:57 GMT -5
yea i do! how did u modify my post while ago?
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Jan 15, 2007 14:01:57 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 14:01:57 GMT -5
WHAT?! What did I do?
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Jan 15, 2007 14:05:01 GMT -5
Post by mangafreakadam14 on Jan 15, 2007 14:05:01 GMT -5
change my post? i didnt type "Emily is not gay!!!!!!!!! "
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Jan 15, 2007 14:05:50 GMT -5
Post by mangafreakadam14 on Jan 15, 2007 14:05:50 GMT -5
idk how that happened?
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Jan 15, 2007 14:12:25 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 14:12:25 GMT -5
Suddenly the girl starts flaiing her arms around. She is struggling. Somehow her arms became glued to her side. Right to left and left to right. She starts to panic."Help!" Moving so much now she can't breath. Everything is growing muffled now. The shadows, she can no longer here them. To her, this end is heaven.
---------*NOT THE ENDING- to be continued
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Jan 15, 2007 14:18:53 GMT -5
Post by mangafreakadam14 on Jan 15, 2007 14:18:53 GMT -5
dang thats good!!!!!!
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Jan 15, 2007 14:19:54 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 14:19:54 GMT -5
*smiles real big* thwank you
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Jan 15, 2007 14:23:37 GMT -5
Post by mangafreakadam14 on Jan 15, 2007 14:23:37 GMT -5
your welcome!!!!*smile back really big*
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