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Jan 15, 2007 14:33:50 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 14:33:50 GMT -5
"Leave her alone!" "Ow! Stpo it Mike!" "Get that thing off her!" "We always go through. Look, everytime she.......snaps we have to put the jaket on her and put her in the.....special room." There is a pause. "It's to help her." "Liar!"
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Jan 15, 2007 14:51:43 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 15, 2007 14:51:43 GMT -5
good! but confusing me!
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Jan 15, 2007 14:54:08 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 14:54:08 GMT -5
It's suppose to. Cliff hanger. I'll write some more later.
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Jan 15, 2007 14:54:53 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 15, 2007 14:54:53 GMT -5
kool!
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Jan 15, 2007 14:55:16 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 15, 2007 14:55:16 GMT -5
tell me the titles of the stuff so i can put a thread up for it!
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Jan 15, 2007 16:14:13 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 16:14:13 GMT -5
The voices start to fade....... Silence once more. She lyes there. Motionless, paralyized. "Mida? Mida?" The voice. So faraway. "Look at her! Everytime some little thing happens you put her in the straight jacket!" "Mike stop--" "Stop calling me Mike!"Slowly she opens her eyes.................
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Jan 15, 2007 16:15:49 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 15, 2007 16:15:49 GMT -5
wow!
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Jan 15, 2007 16:17:39 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 16:17:39 GMT -5
Maybe I'll make a manga from this. Do you think I should?
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Jan 15, 2007 16:21:58 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 15, 2007 16:21:58 GMT -5
yea!!!
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Jan 15, 2007 16:37:56 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 15, 2007 16:37:56 GMT -5
"M-Mike?" She's in a room by herself. The room is white with cushion on the walls. Mida, the girl, is in a straight jacket. There is a door with a small glass window in it. She starts struggling but that doesn't last long. the voices she heard left, now she's alone once more. Solitude. "Mida?" She looks at the door and sees Mike. Mike starts walking to Mida. "I hate it when they put you in a straight jacket!" He reaches to unhook the straight jacket but Mida curls in a ball. Mike isn't surprised by the action. He gets up and leaves. "He said you'll be out of here when you calm down. I don't think you need or deserve this!"
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Jan 16, 2007 16:05:06 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 16, 2007 16:05:06 GMT -5
cool!!!!!!!!!
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Jan 16, 2007 16:09:43 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 16, 2007 16:09:43 GMT -5
Click. The door closes. Every muscle in Mida's body hurts right now. She's use to it though. She stay's curled in a ball and hope she doen't fall in to another world. (Please no more attacks.) She thinks. (Mike well come again....) She struggles once more with the jacket and gives up.
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Jan 16, 2007 16:13:07 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 16, 2007 16:13:07 GMT -5
awesome!
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Jan 16, 2007 16:28:29 GMT -5
Post by zoedosadaku on Jan 16, 2007 16:28:29 GMT -5
Some where else. "This place is so preety!" Yanu starts exploring around. "Hey look! A waterfall." There is nothing there but a bed. It's so preety. What do you think Iny?" the is silence. " Yeah, lets do that! I'm getting hungry myself, Dai." Outside Yanu's room is is Aunt, she's crying. ( Oh no. Not again!"
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Jan 16, 2007 16:52:59 GMT -5
Post by SamuelAdam*(: on Jan 16, 2007 16:52:59 GMT -5
cool!!
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